I redrew all the passenger car panels, gave Mendoza a blanket to hide his stilts, and fixed all the problems with the line of action.
I'm sorry about those images from before. I thought they'd be clickable. Let me know if there are any other problems.
3 comments:
I say watch the screen direction. There are a few shots in which the characters seem to be looking or facing in the wrong direction. Also make sure things that are moving have space on screen to actually move to. I noticed this most with your first shot of the train from a distance. You should place it on the left side of the screen instead. While it is okay to keep the background a little more rough then the characters, as it stands they look a little too bare and similar. It is hard to tell what part of the train things are happening in. Finally, since I haven't seen the character designs for this project yet, I don't have a lot to go on, but I can say that the big guy on the stilts looks a little too similar to the big guy not on the stilts, at least from the waits up. Maybe just give them a different color from each other. Nice work!
For some reason i can't seem to enlarge the pictures here.
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