Steph:
Great job with the set-up.
Get rid of the crossing characters.
Pitch with more confidence even when it's rough~!
Clean up skills and rendering are now essential.
Brian:
You haven't changed your boards too much. Again.
You can always make this more on model.
The gag with the giant bat was missing.
The Coach's close up was too scared.
Good reaction shot of the Giants.
Brad's fighting pose needs to go~!
Andrew:
Good Rendering.
Lower angle on the Big guy.
Rope gag - Needs to go? Sub with the Oversized cane. From left
How would the ball reaction to the Vibrobat?
Keep it low and fast through the scene.
Zig zag the ball through the shot.
Rusty:
Keep your characters in the model size comparison.
Good gameplay. Works really well.
Works well from a story telling.
Screen direction in the ball hitting.
Size of the alien is too short.
The gameplay works well.
Pull back from the action more...
Too tight on Luisa throwing the ball.
Draw to model but abbreviate.
GET TO IT~!
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