Dailies - 15th March - Team Venture

Eli:
Great use of Chris' boards.
Keep the action moving. Too many cuts.
The alien pitching machine is nicely done but it's too scary too soon.
The shadow as it forms need to be cut down.
Let the ball come to screen and create the cut - transition.
I think the side view and the frontal view are in need of work.
Don't fill the frame. You don't like negative space.
Keep Luisa in one shot.
Lose the pounding on the bars.

Davin:
You don't know the script. That shows a distinct lack of awareness in your work and the connection between the script. Get involved with the group! Your drawing is beyond rough, you've got to tighter up your style more...

Chris:
Great treatment of the Aliens. Daisy chain? Ask Director.
Excellent change in the reaction of the coach.
Great dialogue between Mikey and Coach.
The crash zoom in still works GREAT~!
The change in reaction for Mikey is good.
The gag with Aliens is extended but be clear about it and the distance between the ball and the characters.

Thanh:
The graphics with the food and the links with the characters are good.
The layout needs to be refined and the group together needs to be reviewed.
Make the kids hear the ship coming down from orbit and then cut on the action.
The aliens getting beamed up is fine, keep it simple.
The ending 'sunset shot' is in need of reviewing.
Lose the gate and the fencing.

GET TO IT~!