hey again! so i just finished most of the changes that had to be made on my portion of PART 3 of the second half of the script. here is a pdf file of my screen direction changes, and new boards illustrating Eli's pitching machine. the only thing i have to change is the last over head camera move to be more centered which will be done this weekend. unfortunately i cannot make the meeting on sunday night, due to work at the coffee shop in Marin County. sorry guys, but here are my latest boards if anyone has any feedback or comments please don't hesitate.
Chris Rieser
1 comment:
In terms of screen direction it looks good to me. I never felt any jarring movements or anything.
With the dial, rather than just turning from hard to insane, maybe have the alien crank it a few more times and all the difficulty settings read "REALLY INSANE" and the pitching machine actually starts shaking as he is cranking the dial (in the same shot).
Just an idea :) but it looks really great!
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