Hey all, I threw these together pretty quick and wanted to ask if these worked more towards what was said in the critique. If so, I can start building off of these right away.
Hey Rusty, I know they're rough but I find these a little difficult to follow. What happened to working in layers and with a distinctive grey palette - lightest to darkest? Avoiding closed postures in your characters is VITAL. You're running the risk of losing the audience if you turn the characters backs to the audience all the time. The Vince hand stretch shot to the camera is not as successful in terms of silhouette, try a 3/4 turn to the other character~! Continue to loosen up Rusty!
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Hey Rusty, I know they're rough but I find these a little difficult to follow. What happened to working in layers and with a distinctive grey palette - lightest to darkest? Avoiding closed postures in your characters is VITAL. You're running the risk of losing the audience if you turn the characters backs to the audience all the time. The Vince hand stretch shot to the camera is not as successful in terms of silhouette, try a 3/4 turn to the other character~! Continue to loosen up Rusty!
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